Monday, December 16, 2013

Break Assignments~Don't worry, you'll have plenty of vacation time!


Dear Scholars,                                                                                                    December 15, 2013

Thank you for an amazing start to the school year, and a phenomenal introduction to high school. I have learned so much from you all, and I am excited to get to continue our work during second semester. I hope you will look forward to class novels, literature circles, Shakespeare, articles-of-the-week, research projects, podcasts, poetry month, and some seriously in-depth “art-of-the-essay” work.

Here are your assignments over the break. Enjoy them, and see how they help you develop as a scholar.

1.  Find something you are curious about learning more about. Embark on the “Follow your Curiosity” project, which we continue when we get back in January. Start gathering a list in your writer’s notebook of different things you wonder about, and where this curiosity takes you, whether it’s a book that sparks a curiosity, an article, website, a YouTube video, or the RadioLab.org website with all its amazing audio/visual wonders. Maybe you get curious about something just by being out in the world: seeing nature, traveling around the city, or observing your family and friends. Write down what you are noticing, and come back ready to talk about things that sparked your curiosity. Embrace WONDER.

2. Read “Out of the Dust, by Karen Hesse. Watch some YouTube Videos about the Dust Bowl (See http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guTek7ipD4U to get really great visuals and background, and if you want to watch the whole Ken Burns Dust Bowl Documentary you can find it on Netflix). Come back ready to analyze the book with the class. This is a great example of someone following their curiosity, about this time in our history, when the greatest man-made catastrophe that hit right when the greatest economic disaster was occurring~The Great Depression. 
**If you are not enrolled in my class for spring semester, please return the book the week we get back, and come by to pick up your portfolio and check in with me.**

3. Write me a letter back, full page, with paragraphs and details, reflecting on what you want to learn more about during second semester, what worked for you in this class, what was challenging or where you felt unengaged, and what you think you or I can do differently to help you get the most out of your time here. You can make some resolutions, write some gratitudes, discuss how you have grown as a scholar, or tell a story. Make your letter a work of art.

4.  OPTIONAL: If you are interested in working more on your novel, consider typing it up over break and joining in on a weekly lunch writing group that will workshop novels, and take the project to a polished, published draft through the resources on CreateSpace.

During finals week and over break, please check yourself off for the following assignments, and attach this paper to the letter you write to me, due on January 13, 2014.


☐ Star Reading Test in the Library
(Previous STAR Score: _____ **Remember, you want this to be as close to 9.5 to indicate that you are reading at 9th grade reading level )
☐ Aristotle Poem in writer’s notebook: Create “This is the Middle” section of poem, reflecting on the middle of your school year, using Billy Collins’ poem as an example.
Over Break:
☐ Come in with a list of things you are curious about and want to learn more about.
☐ Read Out of the Dust, return prepared to discuss it and take a quiz on it.
☐ Write a reflective letter for the start of semester two.



Enjoy your well-earned break, and I look forward to getting to work in the new year.

Best,

Ms. Witham

Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Final Book Jacket Projects Due!

Our culminating project for the semester is the Novel Book Jacket. 
**Final day to turn in work is Friday.**

Students should have:

 Cover (50)
   Title and Author—what font/style of text will show the mood/tone of book?
   Images—can be simple or complex, abstract or realistic, MUST be handmade. You can make a collage, trace images, use construction paper cut-outs or original photographs you take, BUT NO CLIP ART!!
  “Blurb” Review from your Novel Sponsor**OPTIONAL
 Revised Excerpts: (150)

 Opening Pages (at least 300 words)    Scene from the Climax (at least 300-500 words)
Choice Excerpts: (at least 300-500 words)
 Scene with a significant literary allusion
 Research-based scene (with a Works cited page)
 STEMM-Inspired scene (use learning from STEMM classes)

 Back of Book summary (at least three paragraphs, vivid character, settting, and conflict description, cliffhanger-ending) (30)
 About the author (at least two paragraphs, in third person) (20)

Friday, December 6, 2013

Extra Credit Opportunities and Novel Next Steps

Congratulations to students who completed the CCSS Pilot Assessment. Thank you for paying close attention and using your class time fully to do this work.

For Monday, the following is required:
Novel Excerpts, revised and typed for peer revision workshop~Please come ready to read and respond to fellow students.
Updated word count for those who still need credit.

Extra Credit: (20 points)
Back of the book summary: At least three paragraphs with vivid character, setting and conflict description, and a cliff-hanger ending.
About the Author: At least two paragraphs, in third person
Drafts of your cover art

For Tuesday Required:
Nanowrimo Reflection~ A full page on what Nanowrimo taught you about yourself as a writer, about the novel writing process, and about long term planning.


Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Novel Reminders: The Three-Step Method for Revising and Editing Your Excerpts

Thanks to all students for your flexibility in switching gears for a few days as we take the Common Core State Standards pilot assessment. Our goal is to finish essays in class tomorrow for most classes. You can help yourself by re-reading the articles and using the planning organizers. 

We are going to start peer writing workshops on Friday, with final edits and polishing over the weekend on those three sections of the novel we are "publishing." Please use the rubric Ms. W gave you and the "three-step Revision Strategy" to do your best revising before you get feedback on Friday.


Here is a reprint of the...

Three-Step Method for Revising and Editing your Novel (or just an excerpt!)


  • For Excerpt: Choose a section of your novel that you want to share with others. It could be first page/last page, or some scene within your novel. 
  1. Read your novel—and don’t worry, reading a first draft is painful! Make notes on things you’d like to change along the way.
  2. Add:
    * Sensory details that help the scene come alive (sight, smell, sound, taste, touch, feeling—NOT all, just the ones that help move your scene)
    * Power Verbs (make dead verbs come alive: ex. run=sprint; look=glance; felt scared=shivered) and make sure your verb tense is consistent (are you in present or past tense? Pay attention to when you are in flashback or current action and make sure you give time indicators: “Three weeks earlier I…” )
    * Character: show character through dialogue, thoughts, gestures, description, background info that makes them seem real
  3. Correct: grammar/spelling/punctuation/capitalization errors and make paragraphs (including for dialogue: a new paragraph is required each time you change speakers)

***Super Tip for catching errors~ READ YOUR NOVEL OUT LOUD!! The ear can catch what the eye ignores!***


Find Rubric here: (you want to be approaching the upper row, a "Developing" Novelist)
http://ywp.nanowrimo.org/files/ywp/nano_ywp_10_suggested_rubric.pdf

Final Excerpts should be ready by Monday, however...

**Please save your work when you type it, and be prepared to edit and reprint if you further feedback on Monday. You may bring in your work on a flash drive and print/edit in class. **

On Friday or Monday Ms. Witham will have construction paper for book jacket creation. You will be working on a "back of the book summary" and an "About the Author" bio for the jacket. 

Your cover should be hand-created. You may use a drawing, a collage, a photograph you have taken. The lettering may be printed from a computer, but the visuals should be your own creation, not clip art. 

Monday, December 2, 2013

Close Reading Strategy for Articles


Close Reading Strategy

Please use this strategy to read the articles for tomorrow’s discussion.
  1. Number the paragraphs (both articles have 11 paragraphs, with paragraph 8 continued on the back side)
  2. Read through as best you can to get the big ideas
  3. Underline/box the significant ideas in the article.
  4. Reread, and on the right of the page, note rhetorical devices (repetition, quotations, facts/statistics, rhetorical questions, etc)
  5. Reread and note instances of persuasive appeals on left: Ethos, Pathos, Logos
  6. Write down questions for class discussions.
Please come in prepared to discuss and analyze the articles in preparation for writing an argumentative essay on Wednesday.